LI: To unpack a procedure and explore the content, structure and language features used in the exemplar.

For this challenge we’ve created a procedural text on how to create a paper brachiosaurus.

Once upon a time beyond the seven seas, there was a place called the “Long White Cloud” . It was a place where trees were young and mountains aged and warriors were merged. Amongst that place there was a massive fiery giant, bad tempered, always a way to bubble in anger. When she was dozing to sleep she was interrupted and woken up from her slumber. Fury expressed as the thick ashes filled the skies.

During the time Maungrei was dozing to sleep, then was awoken. Maungrei rumbled in anger, her emotions were taken over by inflamed rage. As her wrath took over her emotions, other mountains scrambled in fear before mayhem was
unleashed. After she exploded in fury, nobody was there to experience it. She felt guilty for her actions, she was abandoned.

Maungrei was running out of lava as her volatile volcanic heart bubbles down to the bottom. She noticed she was lonely and regretted her actions. Whilst she was calming down, thick ashes faded away and volcanoes started to creep back, but not too close as she might erupt again. Maungarei decides to fall back into her emotionless state because of her depression being by herself, alone and feared. As she falls into her slumber her oldest sibling helps her relax so she isn’t dreadful and so the world will be normal and calm again. After her older sibling helped her calm down she became quiet and dormant for the greater good. Now she stands tall and vigilant.

Peace was awakened into the world, skies never looking more blue. As Maungarei stands quietly tall and vigilant. The people no longer live in fear, buildings start to come into the picture, trees are more green. Everything is modern and no longer destroyed. Now people visit Maungarei and build walk paths and roads. In the meantime stories are told about the fiery giant, Maungarei.

The volcanoes all around New Zealand have become watchful guardians for the people of the Long White Cloud. They are very quiet but can still roar.

SCARED

Scared is black, like midnight when ghost wonder around

Scared looks like a rabbit horrified in a wolfs smelly dent

Scared sounds like one group screaming in a haunted mansion at midnight when the blood moon is out

Scared feels like someone invading your house like you feel anxious about them killing you and you are in your room feeling shivers down your spine

Scared is a horror movie but in real life

Scared is a ghost haunting you because you’re cursed.

DO YOU WANT TO BE A LEADER

Leaders are people, good and bad, who can influence other people to change the world.

A leader should always use positive words.

Negative words can hurt other people’s feelings, but being positive will get leaders more followers

A good leader shows respect in return because if they show respect to others they will respect you in return. Respect looks like influencing someone is a small thing in this world, it can be a big thing in school, family, and countries.

A good leader is honest i feel like not all leaders are honest, but if your honest you can get trusted you might even get more followers.

The old man writing

The old man sits in his destroyed room and dusty bed. His brain is hurt like his heart sitting on his ruined bed remembering all the good and happy moments with his wife, the record is playing dancing with his wife. The pipe in his hand is burning the tabaco toward the broken and cracked ceiling.